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      As we entered the cave I instantly shut my eyes, reacting to the fear. I also dug my fingers into the fishes sides for a better grip. I wasn't sure if the fish would think about my size on his back as he went through the cave's entrance and into the channels. When I opened my eyes I found it was not as dark in the cave as I expected. In fact, although it was not as light s it was outside of the cave, i could see quite well. The passage we were in was not very wide, but for the most part it was ample for the fish and myself. Occasionally I would see other passages that led off of the one we were in. The other koi that had served as my "guards" when I was "abducted" and brought into the cave were still with us, though no longer on either side of me. They were following behind us, and in front of us.
      As we slid through the passage, swerving back and forth, I noticed that algae was growing on the surface of the rocks. "How strange," I thought, "that algae is growing on the inside of a cave. It appeared to be what I know as angel hair algae, ad was sort of pretty in its wispy, ghostly look as we went by, lightly stirring the water. It appeared that there were shrimp feeding on it, but the shrimp were the size of small cats. "Things sure grow large here," I thought to myself as I almost flipped off of the koi, tumbling over the front of the fish. For a moment as I tumbled over, our eyes met. He had stopped, but I had not. I Had become so involved with looking at my surroundings that I had relaxed my grip on the fish. As I looked for those brief seconds as I went over its head, I got the impression he was laughing at me. And to be honest, I probably did look rather humerus flailing my arms and legs until i landed on the floor with a loud "umph."
      I stood up and found myself in a larger part of the passage. This was more like room, with a high ceiling. I looked around the room and my attention and vision focused on some movement on the ceiling. The nymph of a dragonfly was moving across the ceiling and had now started down the wall.
      He was headed towards me, and the koi were standing like sentries around me.
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      As I watched the nymph come down the wall I was slowly backing up. The koi behind me also moved closer together, as though to prevent my escape. The angel hair algae was functioning also as spider webs it seemed. There appeared to be smaller fish and insects caught up in it. This was a depressing place despite its original beauty at first glace. The nymph seemed to be moving slowly, but that was okay with me.
      As I leered at the nymph I noticed something happening towards the area of the "room" where we had came in. I was not looking in that direction so I missed what initiated the excitement, but my attention was drawn immediately to it. The koi which were only moment before surrounding me, now had their focus and attention on the entrance to the cave. Some had started moving towards the opening. I could not tell what it was, but surrounded by the brighter light from outside the cave, a shape was moving into the cave. It appeared that this figure was not welcomed. As the figured came closer, I also glanced around quickly and saw that the nymph was also now standing on the bottom of the cave. The nymph also seemed to be staring at the cave's room opening. Was this new arrival a rival or an adversary? Or could it even be an ally? The koi had moved between it an me so that it was blocked from my sight. I am not sure it they did this on purpose, but the results were the same. I moved to the side a little to see if I could see better, but tried not to move too much so as to draw attention back to me.
      As the nymph watched it did not watch for long. It quickly began moving back up the cave's side and into the darkness. I could now see why. Coming into the cave, and just outside the room was a huge frog. This would be considered an enemy to the nymph, I thought. But with it's size and my size, it would not be considered my friend either. It's long tongue was striking out at the angel hair algae, snatching the fish and insects which were recently caught up in it and were struggling to get free. It was not interested in those that were dead. It's appetite was enormous!
      And it was moving into the room, towards me, while the nymph was watching from above.
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      The koi's attention was diverted from me and on the frog. I took this opportunity to move back along the edge of the side of the cave and was able to squeeze into a crevice in the rock. I wondered what would happen once the koi remembered me, or when the nymph would come back down for me. I held my breath as the frog moved closer. Eating as it came ever near me.
      Suddenly the frog lunged forward but not at me! It had seen the nymph on the wall near the top of the cave, and as it lunged forward, its sticky tongue flew out by me towards the nymph, and as the tongue retracted I saw the nymph trying to free itself from it. It was not being successful. I froze with fear, held my breath and prayed. The frogs tongue, with nymph held in it, was drawn into a wide open mouth. The frog sat still for a minute, as though enjoying the latest dinner catch. Then, as though a direct answer to my prayers, the frog turned around facing the opposite wall from me as it turned, and began heading for the entrance to the cave. I exhaled with a huge sigh of relief.
      Strangely enough, the koi had forgotten me as well, for they also began swimming out of the cave. A few would swim in occasionally, but they just seemed to swim in and out as though they were searching for food. Obviously that would not be me, or I would have been eaten by the koi that brought me into the cave. The cave was empty at the moment. Slowly I moved out of the crevice in the cave's side and decided to look around while I was alone. I needed to explore as much as possible while there was nothing in the cave with me. Looking around I saw that there were two ways out at the back of the cave. one was a little bigger than the other, but both were too small for the koi that I had seen so far to be able to enter. They were both large enough for me to go in so I was happy to see another way of escape in case I was trapped in here again. I headed towards the larger opening of the two.
      Just in time, I slipped into the opening as a koi brushed by, curiously inspecting me.
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      As I looked around this larger "back" entrance, for some reason it looked familiar. I stared at it as I ran through my memory banks trying to picture where I had seen such a place before. I was taking the entire cavern opening in as I thought, and as I turned to face where I had entered I saw the big "room" that I had left a few mutes ago. The koi continued to swim nonchalantly in and out of it through the front opening. I saw various bugs also coming in and out, some getting trapped in the angel hair algae. Nothing there reminded me of where I was to stir my memory, so I looked back at my surroundings. The tunnel went on back and seemed to curve, blocking my view as to how far it went or what laid ahead.
      I was not sure if I wanted to go further "exploring" this labyrinth of unknown proportions. I decided I needed to proceed to try and find my way out of this water encasement, but resolved within myself I would not go in any places that I had to squeeze into that would be difficult to make a quick retreat. I was not that foolish, even under these circumstances.
      As i slowly headed back into what i determined was deeper into the cave, I took in the scenery that surrounded me. I had determined to explore my imprisonment in this pond or whatever it was. The thought struck me once again. In all of the excitement of the nymph and the frog, I had failed to remember that I was under water. I was at the bottom of a body of water, but was continuing to breath without any problems. I thought back to how I had fallen into my pond, and had somehow arrived in this place. Not my pond, but still under water. I then remembered why this passage seemed familiar. It looked much like the passageway that I was swept through from my pond into where I found myself when the rushing water ceased.
      Could this be my way home? I stepped up my pace.
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      As I came around the first "curve" in the passageway, I immediately realized the passageway was a long corridor type passageway, with "halls" leading off in varying directions from it. My passageway was not straight, but I could see where the side passages opened off of it. I stopped and looked at them, wondering if it was one of those openings that would take me out of this watery world. I then thought about seeing TV shows that depicted people getting lost in caves, and unable to find their way back out. I had not considered getting confused as to my path back when i headed out of the big "room." I had wanted to find my way out of hear that I acted hastily as I went through the opening. Now I found myself thinking about taking another opening, and wondering if it would also give me more choices of openings, and where they would lead. I realized that this could be, and perhaps would be, a large maze of similar looking caverns.
      I stood there deep in thought, and though seeing the cavern's walls, and openings, I was not seeing anything else. Maybe I should more correctly say, not noticing anything else. There were things I was not seeing. There were smaller fish swimming by me on occasion that were gray, and not brightly colored. Maybe that is why I did not "see" them. They were there, but not in a standout way. They were just passing by. There were also snails on the sides of the walls, going about eating algae. Maybe that is why there was not the same amount of string algae here. Maybe it was because there was not as much light. No matter the reason, there was not the ensnared insects in angel hair algae found here. I decide to move on in the cavern I was in, and would not investigate the side "doors." It looked to be maybe 50 yards to the end if i went straight ahead before this passage ended, or before it curved and went on in another direction. I determined that I would stop at the exits out of this tunnel and look down them as I came to them, but would not enter them. I would just see what they looked like, standing on the outside. I chuckled to myself, as I thought "I will see what's behind door number 1, nor door number 2," from the old "let's Make a Deal" TV show.
      As I chuckled with the thought, an ominous thought came to me. On the show, the doors sometimes had great prizes awaiting, but at other times, there were not so good things awaiting you. Would I find things I hoped for, or things that I would dread. Maybe they were neither.
      The first side tunnel was just ahead, on my left. I will get my first door.
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      As I looked around the cave's entrance I saw a drab looking cavern filled with mud. The mud looked to be deeper than in the cavern I was currently in, and I saw no reason for me to enter into this cavern. I could not see that there was an opening at the back or that it went much deeper beyond my sight. The mud was deep, as I tested it with my foot, extending my leg down into it to test it. I could not tell it's depth as I could not touch bottom with the one foot, so was not willing to put two feet in.
      I slipped my foot out of the mud and back into the "main cavern, moving on to the next side cavern.
      This cavern was also on my left, and I wondered if it and the previous side cavern might actually be joined somewhere towards the back. It too was filled with mud. This entrance was a little larger than the previous one. I could squeeze into the other opening, but this one allowed me to enter quite easily, making viewing the cavern much easier. I had not really looked at the size of the last cavern being concerned over the depth of the mud, and perhaps the slightly narrow entrance. Now I wondered if the cavern may have gotten bigger as it went back into the rock. The shadows and twists and turns of the caverns make it hard to determine where they might lead. I reminded myself that I do not want to get lost in here.
      As I turned my attention back to the cave that I was currently looking into I took more careful note of it's contents. There was nothing but mud just as there was in the previous cavern. I started to turn away to continue by journey through the main passageway when movement caught my eye. Rising from the mud was another large frog, lying within the warmth of the mud. This my have been the frog that i had seen earlier, but i doubt it. He had not come by me when I was in the cave's passage, and that one had gone out the way I had been brought in. This definitely must be a different frog, with a different way of entry. A little hope came to my thoughts. There is another way in and out of here! This frog proves it.
      Concerned with the frog, and perhaps its appetite, I moved on down the corridor, trying not to disturb the frog.
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      As I lumbered down the cave I realized it was growing gradually wider and taller. The scenery was no different, just rock walls on both sides, and above me. The floor also was rock, but not much mud in this cavern. I wondered if t was from the amount of traffic it might receive. I leered ahead at the opening coming in about 40 feet. Nothing looked much different than what I had already seen from the cavern looking into the other side passages. I assumed there would be more mud, and hopefully not another frog.
      As I lost myself in thought, I was awakened from my daydream to the movement of water around me. Something was coming towards me from behind. I turned just in time to see the frog which had left its resting place in the side cavern was now swimming towards me. I quickly looked around, but saw no crevice or hiding place. I could not outrun it and especially could not out swim it. I was trapped. I had not seen any sticks along the way to try to make a weapon, and my belt would not work now. The frog continued towards me but was not in a hurry. Perhaps it realized that there was no where for me to go. Maybe it had never tried to eat a human before, after all, I would be more than a bite full. I turned to face the frog, stretching out my arms and legs as broad as I could, trying to make myself as big as possible. When I did, it seemed to startle the frog. It seemed to have stopped in its approach and sat staring at me. I guess at that moment, in sheer panic, I lost it. I must have lost my mind. As the frog st there sizing me up, and I stood petrified with arms and legs outstretched as though in the middle of a jumping jack, I thought I heard a chuckle.
      "A giggle?" I thought. I heard a giggle? I was terrified, imagining being devoured by a frog, or partially devoured. I was afraid to look around to see where the sound came from, but I immediately realized that sounds in the cave, even caves filled with water, create an echo. I stood rigid, afraid to move, or as I have heard before, i was petrified. Then I heard it again. That little giggle was not in my head, and was not from me. Either someone else was in the cave, or this frog had the capacity to giggle. Was the frog laughing at me? I was terrorized and the frog was laughing? I preferred to think that someone else was in this water world with me.
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      As the frog grew closer to me I could see on it's back a figure. It was a child riding on the frog as though it were a horse. It was the child giggling. I was not losing my mind. there had been giggling and it was the child evidently giggling at the look of terror that had to have been on my face as the frog had drawn nearer to me. I noticed a vine in it's mouth, perhaps a parrot's feather stem. The child was using it as a bridal and reins. The child was giggling more dramatically as it grew nearer to me. I now saw a saddle-type fixture that appears to be made from the seed pod of a lotus. It was an amazing sight!
      I stared with perhaps a gaping mouth, although my mouth was not open. As the child and frog now was in front of me I could see the child's features clearly. It was no one that I knew, and as best I could tell, it was no one i had ever met or even seen. The child looked to be about seven or eight years old. The hair was dark, and shoulder length, but I could not tell if it was a male or female. The face was oval shaped, with chubby cheeks but no distinguishing features that would set the child apart by a nationality, nor an indication as to being male or female. The eyes were dark, but exuded a playful look that said, "you can trust me." At least that is what i read into them.
      Around the child's neck was a compound layer necklace made of small stones, perhaps found in the flower pots where pond plants had been planted. The child had on a par of shorts that showed age as the legs were tattered but they were made of blue jean material, and did not show a lot of wear. The child had no shoes on.
      As I stood taking in the sight before me, I also noticed that the child was also viewing me with just as much curiosity. I also had moved from taking in the vision, and had gone into analyzing the situation. "Where had this child come from? Where were the parents? How many others were here? How log had they been here? Could they not escape from this place?" and the thoughts kept racing through my mind. I was trying to think of what questions to ask first, but before I could speak, the child motioned me to get on the frog, sitting behind him.
      I hesitated, but really, what choice did I have?
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